Read/Write Challenge – Day 18

“Children are very sensitive to injustice, you know.” The Edible Woman, by Margaret Atwood, p. 160.

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“Children are very sensitive to injustice, you know.” The woman–Eugenia Fairfield, 67 years old, of 1137 Covent Lane–removed blue plastic gardening gloves with a faded print of red-hatted gnomes from her hands and smoothed her rumpled shorts. She wore the sort of woven straw sun visor peculiar to lady gardeners. It made a circular frame for the coils of glossy black hair shot through with silver that she’d piled up behind it. The officer’s eyes kept returning to that hair, marveling at the way the strands wove in and out of each other in loops and braids. It was like some intricate model of an atom or the solar system, with lines drawn in to show the orbits of even the smallest asteroids.

“And adults aren’t, would you say? Sensitive to injustice, I mean?” Officer Patterson asked absentmindedly as she filled out the lengthy incident report pinned to her clipboard. It was an art form, sustaining the bare minimum of conversation needed to keep a witness standing there, patiently waiting for all of the blanks to be filled and the applicable boxes checked. You wanted to keep them attentive, keep them talking, but stall any serious recitation of the facts until the appropriate moment, when you’d reached that portion of the form.

The officer had tried other methods, of course. At first she’d filled the various parts of the form out in any old order. But something always got missed that way. She tried scribbling notes in a flip notebook, like some sort of overeager novice reporter, then copying the information neatly into the form later, seated in the cramped squad car, between bites of marinara meatball sub. But inevitably at such times another call would come in. She’d wind up sitting at her desk long after her colleagues had left for the evening, baffled as to the meaning of some inscrutable notation from earlier in the day. No, this was the best way.

“I wouldn’t say they’re insensitive to it. Not all of them, at any rate. But a degree of complacency grows up, wouldn’t you say? You must observe that all the time, in your field …”

“Mmm. Hmm.” Officer Patterson wrote a bit faster, drawing firm diagonal lines through the portions of the form that didn’t seem to apply.

” … Take what happened here ….” She finally came to “Witness Account,” and following it, the tidy yet always insufficient block of seven horizontal lines.

“Yes. What did happen, Ms. Fairfield? In your own words.” She always added that. It was silly, but she had found it to be effective.”

“Well officer, I have to say, I’ve lived here 30 years and never seen anything like it.”